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Essay: Formative Feedback




After receiving my formative feedback from richard he gave me a number of adjustments that I should make to my essay to strengthen it overall. 
  • In the 1000 words evaluation of 'catfish' link back to the quotes and the comments that have been made throughout the essay
  • Re-write the conclusion, in a summative triangulated style which outlines the keys points and quotes discussed within the essay
  • Add reference or quotes to the conclusion if relevant


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